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Postby Pa on Wed Nov 07, 2007 7:41 am

a few shots i was happy with from monday afternoon....thanks for looking


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Postby radar on Wed Nov 07, 2007 7:56 am

Very good action shots Pa,

you are getting pretty good at this. First and last ones would be my favourites. My only suggestion would be to check the skin tones, I find them a bit too red. That could be because they didn't put their sunscream as told by their Mom, not sure. :wink: :wink:

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Postby the foto fanatic on Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:00 am

I agree with André - #1 is a cracker and #4 is also very good.

You need more goofy-footers so that you can include their faces from that vantage point!
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Postby Pa on Wed Nov 07, 2007 1:11 pm

thanks Andre and Trevor....was a lot of cloud covering and clearing the sun..... made it difficult to set white balance .... other times i forgot.....probably should have had it set on auto.....Trevor the waves run along the headland.....most of the time the surfers are facing away.
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Postby Jeff on Wed Nov 07, 2007 5:26 pm

Great shots well captured .

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Postby Pehpsi on Thu Nov 08, 2007 5:00 pm

Great set!
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Postby Phanoongy on Thu Nov 08, 2007 5:25 pm

Good set of shots...makes me want to go back and surf...been years since ive gone....don’t even know if my wetsuit still fits...ive put on a little weight ...bugger :oops:
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Postby Pa on Thu Nov 08, 2007 6:26 pm

thanks for the feedback folks.
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Postby Pa on Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:04 am

I've found out since posting these that the young surfer in image 4 has signed a couple of contracts with a surfing company.
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