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A Darker Shade of White on White

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 9:24 am
by SteveGriffin
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The Guiding Light

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Hair Cut Day

Comments please

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 9:30 am
by the foto fanatic
Hi Steve

I like the simplicity and the concept in the first one, and the lighting is appropriate for the subject.

I also like the concept for #2, but the image is a bit too dark overall. I also wonder whether you could make the "hair-clippings" a bit more obvious.

Quite imaginative table-top images.

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 9:53 am
by iposiniditos
Yes, 1st one is really beautiful, dreamy!

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 2:02 pm
by Alpha_7
Love your concepts!

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 2:10 pm
by Glen
Steve, I really like one and it fits perfectly with the theme. Hard to get the shapes white with the light behind.

PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 4:43 pm
by SteveGriffin
These were a bit of fun to create. I am away at the moment - sunning it up in downtown Polkobin. I think that the hair cut day shot will improve (lighten up) with some savage curves work but that will have to wait for a few days.

PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:09 pm
by petermmc
Hi Steve,

I like them both. The first one has some 'light from above' which is a good look and the background in the second one is more like a horizon which is also a good effect. I might suggest raising the light a little on the second one in height so that the images are more separated from the black sky. Great shots. What scissors do you use? :)