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Postby stubbsy on Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:29 pm

A few more pics from my recent NZ trip. Image #1 was taken with the Nikkor 10.5 fisheye and is partially defished. The remainder were taken with the Nikkor 28-70 f/2.8

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Postby gstark on Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:32 pm

Peter,

The second of these leaves me ... yawning.

The other two are up to your usual standards though.

Have you tried cropping about 50% of the sky from the first?
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Postby Killakoala on Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:47 pm

I really like the first one as it is. I think the extra sky and clouds adds much more depth and dimension to the image.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:56 pm

Typical of your high technical quality and pleasing asthetics. I am particularly drawn to the middle image. It breaks the rules...has nothing of interest in the foreground...yet works wonderfully. I have spent some time enjoying it for those reasons. Despite a blandness of colour and a uniformity of tones in the vegetation the depth illusion succeeds because of the recessional perspective in the clouds. The only thing missing is the Malboro man! :D :D
The last image seems a little boxed in at the bottom creating some visual awkwardness. I find it uncomfortable to look at. If that was your aim then you have achieved your goal. (I encourage photographers to create images that sit uncomfortably in the frame. It's a creative challange and there is much to be learnt in the construction)
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Postby Geoff on Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:15 pm

The 1st image is absolutely awesome, super sharp, very appealing to the eye ..it pops! I like the 2nd, but don't have an opinion about the 3rd...

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Postby ABG on Thu Nov 15, 2007 10:09 pm

G'day Peter,

I love the first two, but the thhird photo is a little tightly cropped for my liking.
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Postby robert on Thu Nov 15, 2007 11:15 pm

#2 is what I like. I spent such a long time looking at it.

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Postby Steffen on Fri Nov 16, 2007 12:46 am

Ok, not sure how to say what I want to say...

For #2 I'm with Gary and Matt alike. It is lacking something (more extreme perspective perhaps?) but the prominent division into 4 bands creates a depth illusion that is intriguing all by itself.

Number one would gain a lot from cutting some of that beautiful sky, by greatly enhancing the perspective effect, and sucking the viewer right in.

I haven't connected yet with #3, which means nothing, I'll give it a bit more time... It looks almost flawless, though.

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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Nov 16, 2007 9:26 am

I don't really like #3 all that much - nothing technical, the subject isn't to my taste. Perhaps it just pales beside the other two.

I wouldn't change either #1 or #2, if I had been good enough to take them. :)

#1 is a fabulous WA view of Queenstown on Lake Wakatipu and the Remarkables in the background. The sky adds to the perspective.

And #2 is a very pleasing landscape. The muted colours and the breeze-bent grasses are very pleasing to my eye.
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Postby Bindii on Fri Nov 16, 2007 10:41 am

Oooh the shot of Queenstown bought back some memories for me... mostly of how awful my pics of the place were *sigh*... its a cracking shot btw... did you take it from the top of mountain where the fun park thing/restuarant is?.. or helicopter etc?..

I also adore the second one... it has a feeling of isloation and peace about it... the last is typical of that area... nice also..

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Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Fri Nov 16, 2007 11:53 pm

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Postby colin_12 on Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:23 am

Just to buck the trends Peter,
I would probably look at taking out half of the fore ground with a crop.
But that could be that I am just not into buildings. :wink:
Lovely colours in all as usual though.
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