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Nudes - not work safe!

Postby Bindii on Wed Nov 14, 2007 11:32 pm

From a nude workshop..

and yes I wore clothes to it... ;)

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Postby bago100 on Thu Nov 15, 2007 12:35 am

Bindii

Brilliant photography.

I like them all but especially the first photo.

In my opinion this photo has movement, serenity, joy and represents a celebration of indentity and gender.

Thanks for sharing these

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Postby shakey on Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:00 am

To me #3 is the standout shot, great pose, framing and tonal range. I thought the last shot looked like the bloke was constipated and straining to get it out on some primitive dunny but I'm a bit of a philistine when it comes to creative artistic nude shots. I sure it has some other qualities I'm unable to appreciate.. :lol:
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Postby Alex on Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:47 am

Love the tones in the last two. The 2nd last is a standout from technical and artistic points, beautiful b&w treatment. Very tasteful.

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Postby Handlebars on Thu Nov 15, 2007 2:51 am

I love no.4 , quit surreal, its almost as if he is climbing out of a picture frame.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Nov 15, 2007 6:51 am

All excellent pix. Excellent compositionally and creatively.

I really like #4 because of the originality and the range of tone.

There seems to be something not quite right about the male's back in #1. It could be a bit over-sharpened, but the texture doesn't sit right with me, and I think that if it were smoother the image would be stronger.

Well done - you are really nailing this B&W stuff!
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Postby Old Bob on Thu Nov 15, 2007 6:52 am

Great shots again, Sue. Number three is the one that stands out for me, but as usual, they all have great quality.

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Postby gstark on Thu Nov 15, 2007 7:40 am

Sue,

As Trevor has pointed out, the tonal range in #4 is wonderful.

There is a scruffiness to the background, and that seems to sit well with the model and enhance this image. To me it feels almost dirty in the sense that everything needs a really good cleanup, and the whole just works as a result.

In #2, I'd have preferred to see the model a bit more towards the rh side of the frame; at the moment he seems poised to run out of the image.
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Postby Big Red on Thu Nov 15, 2007 2:45 pm

it looks like someone has painted part of her black in #1

#3 & #4 are both brilliantly done 8)
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Postby Killakoala on Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:02 pm

The last one is the stand out for me. As has been said before me, the tonal range is perfect for the subject matter. It reminds me of a kind of 'rebirth.'
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Nov 15, 2007 5:49 pm

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#4 and #1 are superb (and in that order). I generally find nudes quite boring but those two rather than just being some arty shot of a bit of flesh extend the human form to make them a more organic part of the environment they are in. This in turn gives a really powerful and captivating shot. This is the best work I have seen from you and that's a big call given you've done some great work in the past.
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Postby jethro on Thu Nov 15, 2007 7:46 pm

Sue No4# looks like something the band Tool (pardon the pun) or Mettalica would add to their album covers. This is great work. As a rule of thumb most of you images are first class.
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Postby zafra52 on Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:09 pm

I think all of them are great images. I like 1 first and 4 for the reason already given by Gary and Graham. Very good work!

Out of curiosity, what lenses did you use?
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Postby chrisk on Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:20 pm

#4 looks like a humna gollum ! unbelievable tones. beautifully done.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:05 pm

Powerful work there Bindii. You have exploited shape and space to the max and your technical quality is high. That's art! :D :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:52 pm

Sue these are wow! Really strong, earthy images, top notch stuff. The 3rd would be the weakest, but I like the concept just think recomposing with more space on the left would work well.
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Postby byrt_001 on Thu Nov 15, 2007 10:23 pm

wow love the last one! excellent!!
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Postby Bindii on Fri Nov 16, 2007 7:45 am

cricketfan wrote:
There seems to be something not quite right about the male's back in #1. It could be a bit over-sharpened, but the texture doesn't sit right with me, and I think that if it were smoother the image would be stronger.


Yeah that annoyed me too... but he had lots of scarring and pits on his back and I couldnt be bothered healing them... the pp'ing enhanced it though... I might have another try with this one and see if smoothing it will make it better... :)


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Out of curiosity, what lenses did you use?


Ummmm ... a variety of lenses.. some of them kit and some not... I don't have any L series lenses though... I am fairly sure that most of these were taken with the 28-135mm Canon lens.. ( http://www.canon.com.au/products/camera ... isUsm.aspx ).. its not expensive about $800 new...

And thanks everyone for the crits I always appreciate the time that it takes it view and reply on photo's.. I'm going to try and rework a couple of these on your crits (adding some space to the sillouette etc) thanks for pointing it out to me guys.. sometimes you really need to view a shot through someone elses eye's to really see it..

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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Nov 16, 2007 8:54 am

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#1 - the flow in this pic works extremely well. As to the back of the man - leave it in its natural state - would you take a photo of a leper then clone out all of the pits and scars - an emphatic no.

#2 - a good pose for this contre jour type shot, The reflectance of the sun on the right arm and butt adds depth.

#3 - The pose, the frame and the model herself are all reminiscent of Man Ray’s work - excellent

#4 - again, great framing but the pic would benefit from more of a low key lighting IMO.
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Postby devilla101 on Mon Nov 19, 2007 3:18 pm

Just gorgeous shots there. Beautiful exposures especially the last one.
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Postby Bindii on Mon Nov 19, 2007 10:46 pm

sirhc55 wrote:
#4 - again, great framing but the pic would benefit from more of a low key lighting IMO.


Yeah.... I think I might end up redoing that shot as it was only natural lighting..... and very very dark so its a slow exposure hand held on a monopod.. I don't think it would be too hard to darken it a bit more in PP'ing...

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Postby marcotrov on Tue Nov 20, 2007 9:59 pm

Lovely work Bindii. The last is incredibly vivid and visually engaging. I agree with Chris here very much Man Ray'ish. If I were a believer in reincarnation Bindii I'd have to rename you Manii in a helluva better form :wink: Terrific images. :)
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