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Sea Dragon

Postby Willy wombat on Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:51 pm

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Taken under Flinders Pier with my wide angle kit (10.5mm)
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:57 pm

Excellent shot although it looks as if it could do with a little more contrast (in the greens) :)
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Postby ATJ on Sun Nov 25, 2007 6:46 pm

Steve,

Great shot with lots of detail. It looks like you white balance is out as you have lost a lot of colour from the dragon. It is good you have included his eggs, but would have been better if all the tail was included.

It also looks like you have pretty good viz, although with a 10.5mm lens, you would have been pretty close.
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Nov 25, 2007 7:27 pm

Always an amazing creature to look at. Nice imagery.
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Postby zafra52 on Sun Nov 25, 2007 9:24 pm

Amazing! Is it an aquarium or were you in the water also?
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Postby Ant on Sun Nov 25, 2007 9:35 pm

Wow that is clear for flinders! Nice shot. I hope you didnt stalk him too much, sea dragons tend to stress very easily!

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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:53 am

zafra52 wrote:Amazing! Is it an aquarium or were you in the water also?


I was in the water! Swimming with the fishes.
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:56 am

ATJ wrote:It is good you have included his eggs, but would have been better if all the tail was included.


Agreed

ATJ wrote:It also looks like you have pretty good viz, although with a 10.5mm lens, you would have been pretty close.


Visability was awesome, subject would have been about 5-10cm off the front of the dome. You have to get super close with this lens! Positioning of the strobe is a challenge

Ant - I saw three dragons on the dive (2 with eggs) and I photographed them all - but I never touched them and made sure not too many shots on any one fish.

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It was a good day (and not bad for my first time with this kit). More shots soon.
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Postby Handlebars on Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:52 pm

Awesome! I like the slightly muted background colours, helps the subject really pop off the screen
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