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Experimentation with this Wedding

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Nov 25, 2007 11:46 pm

Feeling stale about weddings at the moment, so i thought i would 'jazz' it up a little for this couple...as they seem young and funky (not that i am that old mind you) lol

I just wanted an editorial look for them.....bar 3 which is there for 'cute' factor.....

Would love some opinions on whether these work or not :)

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Thanks for looking!
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Nov 26, 2007 12:38 am

#2 and #3 works the best for me here :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Nov 26, 2007 12:50 am

2nd one suits the style perfectly.
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Postby MCWB on Mon Nov 26, 2007 6:48 am

#1 is sensational except for the vertical banding texture thing, I assume you added this in PP? #2 is awesome! #3 is a bit hot with the flash for me (background is beautiful though), and #4 seems a funny crop, too much or not enough. I think either I want to be seeing what she's looking at (zoomed out) or I want her to fill more of the frame (zoomed in); it's a bit awkward at the moment.
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Postby aussichef on Mon Nov 26, 2007 7:54 am

Love the background in #3
the the style of the rest well done
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:50 am

They all work for me - nice stuff Dan
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Postby Ladybird on Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:52 am

I'm going to be the odd one out here I think (and maybe that's because I'm the newest of the members that have commented so far - hence inexperienced), but I really like #1. The vertical striations seem to jazz it up and make it different to the typical wedding photos. I also really like the composition of #2 but find the veil (and the dress to a lesser extent) blend in too much with the floor and background.

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Postby MATT on Mon Nov 26, 2007 10:36 am

wow the light in 3 is amazing...


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Postby Handlebars on Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:58 pm

I enjoy #2, 3 and 4.

I Kinda like #1, but the brides face isn't saying 'happy' like the other shots. I don't mind the abstract effect thou
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