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Misty Forest

Postby Handlebars on Thu Dec 13, 2007 4:56 am

Another shot from Pemberton last year. The mist was floating through the forest, and I was hoping to capture it...

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I think I may need to crop it a bit on the right to remove the dark trunk, but I would like some opinions on whether the shot works.

It looks great to me...but I have emotions tied to the memory, and that is probably skewing my judgment.
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Postby moz on Thu Dec 13, 2007 8:39 am

Nice shot. I wouldn't crop it, the trunk gives good framing. If you can bring the mist out a bit more that would help, but I don't think I could do that so good luck :)
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Postby gstark on Thu Dec 13, 2007 8:50 am

Moz's advice is spot on.

The trunk adds to the image, so keep it.
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Postby Escapism on Thu Dec 13, 2007 9:25 am

Nice shot. I lived there for 5 years...magic part of the world.
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Postby Handlebars on Thu Dec 13, 2007 5:05 pm

Okay so no cropping 8)

I'm not sure how to bring the mist out any more than it is, all my attemps so far have made it more blue in colour. I'll try to have another crack later tonight with the dodge and burn tools. :?
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