Something not quite right - kids portraits

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Something not quite right - kids portraits

Postby dviv on Fri Dec 14, 2007 9:54 am

Hi all,

I took these as a favour for my next door neighbours and something doesn't seem right. Any advice much appreciated.

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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:06 am

The lighting is very flat. Some fill-flash would have helped.

If you have CS3, you can apply some fill lighting in PP.
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Postby dviv on Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:13 am

cricketfan wrote:The lighting is very flat. Some fill-flash would have helped.

If you have CS3, you can apply some fill lighting in PP.


Thanks Trevor - I'll give it a go tonight - much appreciated :)
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Postby DJT on Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:17 am

Yep I agree with Trev. I like the last 2 though.
Seeing since they are just next door, get 'em out for another go. Do you have a reflector that you could use, if you don't want to use flash for fill.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:29 am

Here's one of the pix with only a simple levels adjustment. If you have the RAW file, using some fill lighting would give an even better result, but you can see that it doesn't take too much of a tweak to give it some more snap.
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Postby dviv on Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:36 am

Yeah that's much better. Do you mind sharing which levels you changed?

Thanks again!
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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Dec 14, 2007 12:32 pm

dviv wrote:Yeah that's much better. Do you mind sharing which levels you changed?

Thanks again!


I did a very quick adjustment:

Open file in CS3
Open new levels adjustment layer
Go to the three eye-droppers; click on the black eye-dropper. Find the blackest part of the image (I used the pupil of an eye) and click
Then, select the white eye-dropper and find the whitest area (but not a blown highlight) (I used her shirt) and click.

These adjustments just compress the histogram to give you greater contrast.

That's all I did. You could also adjust the mid-tones by using the centre eye-dropper in the same way, but there was nothing I could see immediately in the image that would represent a neutral mid-tone, and I didn't want to introduce a colour cast.

The image looks slightly warm to me, and if I were working on it, I might be tempted to adjust the WB slightly.

Hope this helps.
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Postby dviv on Fri Dec 14, 2007 12:46 pm

Awesome!

Thanks a bunch - I'm looking forward to giving it a try tonight. :D

Thanks again for the help - I'm REALLY looking forward to the photoshop training mini-meet 8)
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Postby Greg B on Fri Dec 14, 2007 3:25 pm

Exposure and contrast/lighting issues aside, that first shot is a great capture, very nice work.
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Postby dviv on Fri Dec 14, 2007 4:03 pm

Greg B wrote:Exposure and contrast/lighting issues aside, that first shot is a great capture, very nice work.


Thanks Greg, much appreciated. :)

Fortunately they are all pretty photogenic.
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Postby Matt. K on Sat Dec 15, 2007 1:49 pm

There's nothing wrong with these images that a little curves or level adjustment can't cure. They look much better when opened in PShop then they do here on the forum so I'd suggest just a slight curves adjustment to make them pop. If you have CS3 then also try a little shadows/highlight adjustment. Nice work!
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Postby dviv on Sun Dec 16, 2007 8:43 pm

Matt. K wrote:They look much better when opened in PShop then they do here on the forum so I'd suggest just a slight curves adjustment to make them pop. If you have CS3 then also try a little shadows/highlight adjustment. Nice work!


Thanks Matt. I've been playing around with them a bit tonight and they do look a lot better just openeing them in Photosho. Any idea why?
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