Beach Model Shoot - Gemma

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Beach Model Shoot - Gemma

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sat Dec 15, 2007 11:20 pm

Taken during some work i was doing for an agency up on the Gold Coast......thanks for looking C & C welcome :)

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Before the beach lol

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Postby casnell on Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:32 pm

I like them(esp #1), but the lighting seems a bit flat.

(and I'm not trying a double entendre!)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Dec 16, 2007 9:02 pm

Of this set I prefer the last one, I really like your lighting and dig the cascading ringlet on the shoulder.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:02 pm

Thanks guys......interested to know in what way it looks flat, she was in the shade and i would love some tips or an explanation or how i could better them :)

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Postby Oz_Beachside on Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:09 pm

very nice Dan. i've got six of these kinda shoots lined up, and where do I get the time? :D

I like what you have done choosing the shade, saves you holding a difusion panel over her. gives nice soft even light. the flat light comment, is because the shade has made the light so even all over, that the contours and highlights are missing. but sometimes you cant have everything, and need to work with the light you have... you could have perhaps opened up, so the ambient light was very bright, and fill with an on camera flash, and have brighter light in the background, or her side, and fill fash, but lower exposure. but if you didnt have flash available, these shots are spot on! that's what's in my head, written in words, but I dont have much outdoor stuff to show what I mean.
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