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Wet n Wild: Kassie

Postby MattyO on Wed Dec 19, 2007 9:25 pm

According to Kassie, this was her first photoshoot and she was really nervous. But i think she was having me on.

Used my new lightmeter for the first time today, so hopefully these have the exposure spot on!

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Dec 19, 2007 10:34 pm

These are all beautiful natural shots. I would say that if this is her first time she is in for a great career :)
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Postby Nigell on Wed Dec 19, 2007 11:06 pm

I think lighting is best on pic #2 but there is something a little odd about the pose (in particular the way the water makes her body look). Over all the last shot is my fave.
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Postby Bob G on Thu Dec 20, 2007 12:13 am

Matty

You should know - girls always say it's their first time - It's just to make you feel more secure.
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Postby shakey on Thu Dec 20, 2007 12:48 am

Nice shots. The lighting in #2 gives some greater depth to the model's face than the other shots but there are wierd shadows from the flashes. Be nice for those flashes have a softer edge on the body IMO.
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Postby Raskill on Thu Dec 20, 2007 9:18 am

Nice mate. Real nice, she's a good sort, your photos do her justice.

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Postby obzelite on Thu Dec 20, 2007 5:19 pm

exposure is without a doubt spot on, skins tones are great.

3rd one is the pick for me.
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Postby chrisk on Fri Dec 21, 2007 3:10 pm

#3 is a great shot. nice to see a beautiful girl smile once in a while instead of always going for the pouty look which sometimes comes acroos too staged.
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Postby Ivanerrol on Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:21 pm

I'm with Rooz. No.3 Caught her out looking natural IMHO
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Postby chet on Sat Dec 22, 2007 5:51 pm

these are stunning! nice work.
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