2005 Brisbane Motorshow 2

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2005 Brisbane Motorshow 2

Postby leigh999 on Sat Feb 19, 2005 10:54 am

Following the big post from newcomer Shane (sikx5) I thought I would post my first processed effort from the brisbane motorshow.

I wasn't sure whether they would welcome people taking lots of photos but in fact there were photographers of all kinds (P&S, mobile phones, SLRs) at every car. And people were very careful to walk around you as you sprawled on the ground to get that perfect grill image.

I felt more comfortable shooting there than any other place I've been to lately :shock:

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http://leigh999.fotopic.net/p11960019.html PS is this a good size image for people to comment on the photo without blowing our your downloads?
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Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Feb 19, 2005 11:05 am

Nice images Rebecca.

I would like them a tad larger - must be getting old! :lol:
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Postby boxerboy on Sat Feb 19, 2005 11:05 am

Rebecca,

These are nicely composed, very clear shots. What lens did you use?

Don't go much for the borders, though.

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Postby sikx5 on Sat Feb 19, 2005 1:06 pm

Nice looking pictures there!

I never even thought about angles like that, Thanks alot, more ideas :P :P
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Postby Glen on Sat Feb 19, 2005 1:46 pm

Rebecca, nice composition of the three shots together
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Postby Onyx on Sat Feb 19, 2005 4:48 pm

I like the borders, it really does bring out the "lines" aspect of these images. Now this to me crosses the line from photography to art. ;)
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Postby bochup on Sat Feb 19, 2005 7:22 pm

excellent work on this. think you've really done a good job going the extra mile to make it an artpiece.

I'm no expert but IMHO the borders are an excellent idea which I think provide a good step between the vibrant colours/sharp lines you have chosen in your images and the white canvas that flows between the three images.
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Postby leigh999 on Sat Feb 19, 2005 10:07 pm

Thanks for your feedback everybody :D

The images were all taken with the kit lens - I considered that as I was taking 'detail' shots I should get out my Tamron 70-300 but in reality if you used a longer lens people would just walk in front of you. So I stuck with the kit and got as close as I could.

Hope I don't bore you with a variation on the theme - as much as I loved the BW shot I thought the triptych idea might hang together better if they were all detail shots and all strong colour - so here is my amended piece.

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Postby xerubus on Sat Feb 19, 2005 10:55 pm

Rebecca... as usual your shots are spectacular... i like the first shots with the border... well done.

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Postby phillipb on Sat Feb 19, 2005 10:55 pm

Rebecca, the images are nice, but the copyright smack in the middle bothers me. I much prefer it on the bottom in a smaller font even if it was a more prominent watermark.
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Postby rokkstar on Sat Feb 19, 2005 11:59 pm

Really nice set of pics. I love the colour aspect.
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Postby flipfrog on Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:18 am

nice
very professional look....
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