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The Chair

Postby Mal on Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:52 pm

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Taken on a farm near a town called "The Rock". Ben is a guy who has had a very tough life, the owners of the farm give him lodgings for work that he does. He was taking a well earned break from the repairs to this chair.

This shot was taken in the middle of the day, the temperature was hovering around 40, and there was not a cloud in the sky. The shed was stinking hot and Ben walked out for a quick smoke in the "cool shade" He was not keen to pose for a shot so this was a quick grab.

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Postby gstark on Tue Jan 01, 2008 2:16 pm

Mal,

Beautiful. The square crop works well, and you have great shadow detail as well.

I'd like to see just a tad more contrast in the conversion to B&W, so that you have a bit more richness in the blacks.
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:45 pm

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A sensual, sensitive image that deserves the narrative. Nicely done!
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jan 01, 2008 11:11 pm

A moment in time that captures both the human element and a beautifully lit interior - excellent
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Postby the foto fanatic on Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:02 pm

Love the story, the image and the man you have shown us.

Just a terrific photographic essay. :)
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