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Postby iposiniditos on Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:08 pm

thank you very much for your cc as always,
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Postby wendellt on Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:40 pm

your a god damn genius

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Postby PiroStitch on Fri Jan 04, 2008 3:36 pm

Brilliant! Leading lines, framing (no pun intended), conversion, texture, tone. Has it all!

Only one nitpick is if the window was opened just a bit further, then the frame wouldn't appear like it's hitting the head.
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Postby Reschsmooth on Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:19 pm

This is a fantastic image - I love the film look to it, and agree with Wayne's comment re opening the window further.
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Postby makario on Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:45 pm

love your work
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Postby xerubus on Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:54 pm

great composition, excellent exposure, and a great subject. nicely done mate... pure style.

can you tell me more about the subject and location? Very intersting shot.
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Postby Yi-P on Fri Jan 04, 2008 6:47 pm

What else needs to be said? simply fantasic
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Postby Francis on Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:24 pm

ditto on all of the above, great shot
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Postby Mal on Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:38 pm

WOW you have taken something dull and mundane and made it interesting and creative! As usual awesome stuff
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Postby zafra52 on Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:29 pm

Theodoros, a another great image! Do you think it would improve by croping the top part (making it a panorama) just to remove that protruding object in the ceiling?
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Postby iposiniditos on Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:51 am

1000 thanks for your kind words, your comments and your suggestions!

Wayne, you are right but i think you mean closed a bit further right?

zafra, i like your version too :)
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Postby iposiniditos on Mon Jan 07, 2008 12:53 am

xerubus wrote:can you tell me more about the subject and location?

An abandoned hotel somewhere in Greece. About snapshot... :) we were there for the 1st time to see the place and organize a project. When i saw him behind the window, i ask him to look at my lens :D
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