The Cleveland Dam and Watershed

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The Cleveland Dam and Watershed

Postby dooda on Sun Feb 20, 2005 3:40 pm

Cleveland Dam Today. The light was a little harsh but there were a few places where we it didn't destroy the pic. I quite like the bubbles drifting through on the left hand side.

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Came across this grumpy old fellow.
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And this is the reservior. I conscientiously shot for the sweet spot of the lens (I heard it was F9 or so) and I believe I got it. Cropped because I was shooting through a fence (watershed).
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It was a fun day and walk with the dog. I like just heading out by myself and grabbing whatever pic I fancy. Thoughts and critique please.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Feb 20, 2005 4:44 pm

Dave - these are very nice pics - good colour and contrast.

A question re the last pic - is that a house sitting out in the water and if so who would want to live there? :roll:
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Postby nodrog_reversed on Sun Feb 20, 2005 4:52 pm

I like the first two shots. In the first one there's something about the golden colour in the background and the foreground bright reflection that keeps grabbing my eye.

As to having harsh light to deal with you're in great company with all the Aussie photographers battling the summer sun over here.

One postprocessing thought with the "grumpy old man" from a complete novice at this sort of adjustment. Can you lift him out from the background, each time I go back and look at the image it keeps blending into the background for a bit?

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Postby dooda on Sun Feb 20, 2005 4:59 pm

nodrog_reversed wrote:One postprocessing thought with the "grumpy old man" from a complete novice at this sort of adjustment. Can you lift him out from the background, each time I go back and look at the image it keeps blending into the background for a bit?
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Thanks for the comments.

I actually worked quite hard at getting him out from the background as it is. I shot at the widest setting, and tweaked in photoshop until I couldn't get anymore out of it. One thing I didn't try is a blur on the background...hmmm, maybe that would work although I'm not really good with making that look natural. Do you have any tips because my arsenal is pretty much exhausted.
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Postby nodrog_reversed on Sun Feb 20, 2005 5:05 pm

Dave,

I wish I could say "use technique X" but sadly when I said novice that should have read extreme novice :( . The idea of blurring the background sounds good to me too but given the complex shape you're working with I'm not sure how practical it is.

Maybe one of the Photoshop gurus will chime in with a wise solution.

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Postby dooda on Sun Feb 20, 2005 5:29 pm

I feel like I'm on the right track with this one, yet I missed and drown in the blur that is gaussian. Any thoughts. Maybe tomorrow I'll work it over a little more carefully now that I've tried it once and get it just perfect. That would be nice. I really wished that I knew photoshop a little better. It would be great to simply know what to do on this.

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Postby stubbsy on Sun Feb 20, 2005 6:30 pm

Dooda

If you have PSCS, have you tried the new Image/Adjustments/Shadow & Highlight option
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Feb 20, 2005 6:37 pm

Great pics mate. I do like the old tree. It has a kind of 'mystery' to it as it is.
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Postby dooda on Sun Feb 20, 2005 6:46 pm

stubbsy wrote:Dooda

If you have PSCS, have you tried the new Image/Adjustments/Shadow & Highlight option


Yes, in fact I took HIghlight to 100% reduction on this photo, otherwise the highlight at the top would be completely dominating. I just started doing this though today.
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Postby sikx5 on Sun Feb 20, 2005 7:30 pm

Wow really nice pics there, Beautiful Scenery! 8)
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