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Continueing the series

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:22 am
by Alex
Continueing my ghost series. Comments and suggestions are welcome as always.

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Thanks

Alex

Re: Continueing the series

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:31 pm
by Bindii
Well if you set out to scare the hell out of me its worked!

What an eerie image.. its good.. only niggle I have is maybe the light on her forehead is a little overdone maybe???.. :)

Re: Continueing the series

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:57 pm
by Alex
Thanks, Bindi. Appreciate your comments.

Alex

Re: Continueing the series

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:59 am
by Alpha_7
Great concept, I'd suggest the blue light coming from camera left is a little hot, and as Sue said bring the face back a little to make it even more sinister and creepy, has a real Grudge / Ring type feel to it.

If you wanted to push the ghost theme even further, you could always flash then have the model duck down and expose some of the wall through her.