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Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:21 pm
by MattyO
Okay everyone, another shoot for you to critique.... please let me know what you think.

Matty

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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:36 pm
by Bindii
The last two just rock! Not so sure on the posing in the second though as it looks like its not her hand on her breast there.. :)

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:51 pm
by Oz_Beachside
hi matty

very nice shots. maybe a little sweat/oil/dirt to add her to the scene, but very nice shots anyway!
:D

agree with bindi, on one of the shots, looks like a strangers hand, or "the thing" from addams family...

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:20 pm
by MattyO
okay everyone, managed to fix it so the images are displayed now...

makes things easier for everyone :)

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:38 am
by shakey
NOT worksafe for sure. I'm sending the OH&S officer round right now. She definitely needs to put a hard hat on.

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:03 am
by Yi-P
She is too clean to be on a construction site IMHO. A bit of mud, dirt, oil and others might be added to her body/makeup... Just a thought...

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:11 am
by Handlebars
3 and 4 are great...

#2 looks like the glove is stuck to her boob, its kind of bizarre.... :shock:

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:27 am
by Matt. K
Your work gets better and better. I'd still like to see the model forward of the backgrounds a little. This would throw them slightly out of focus and put more emphasis on the model.

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:46 pm
by BullcreekBob
Bindii wrote: Not so sure on the posing in the second though as it looks like its not her hand on her breast there.. :)

Yup, sometimes it's tough being a 'togs assistant.

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:43 pm
by Blokeman
Can I ask about the lighting? I'm guessing the main light is a bit high and to your right, but the inside of the rims are pretty well lit too.
No trade secrets, just the facts Maam....

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:23 pm
by who
Matty recently posted his newest toy, a massive softbox and battery power setup to run it.

So I'd guess that?

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:36 pm
by Blokeman
who wrote:Matty recently posted his newest toy, a massive softbox and battery power setup to run it.
So I'd guess that?

Found it, thanks for the tip...
viewtopic.php?f=18&t=30066&hilit=softbox+AND+battery

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 10:09 am
by Raskill
Matty!!!!

These are really good. The last two are the best, like Matt K said, your going from strength to strength. Your aliens were a great investment. I agree that she needs to be 'dirtier', maybe some grease etc, but that is a minor point.

So wheres the cowgirl images?

:up:

Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 7:08 pm
by zafra52
They are all very well photographed, but I prefer number 1 and 4.