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Look into my eyes...

Postby Geoff on Tue Jan 29, 2008 10:12 am

This was taken on Australia Day of a friend's little girl..I thought the B&W conversion worked reasonably well, it's a pensive look that I quite liked. Critique/comments welcomed:

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Re: Look into my eyes...

Postby Bindii on Tue Jan 29, 2008 10:59 am

Perfect dof.. and the expression on her face captures her innocence beautifully.. :)
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Re: Look into my eyes...

Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Jan 29, 2008 11:27 am

Great work, Geoff. You have nailed the expression and composition. The B&W conversion works really well.
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Re: Look into my eyes...

Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jan 29, 2008 4:39 pm

Great shot, for sure. Comp, DOF and expression, all make it good.
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Re: Look into my eyes...

Postby Benny2707 on Tue Jan 29, 2008 5:30 pm

I'm not sure innocence is the overriding thought for me. She looks a little cheeky even, like she's thinking 'As soon as this guy with the camera is gone I'm outta here'.

Great shot though, the B&W really shows the softness in the sking and the whispy hair makes it all work. Great focus on the eyes as well.
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