A Sideways Look
Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:26 pmYep, Melissa again......
(from the 19 Jan session)
(from the 19 Jan session)
its a cute little red cross though..
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A Sideways Look
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:26 pmRe: A Sideways Look
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 1:10 amAww.. your pic isnt showing here Greg...
its a cute little red cross though..
its a cute little red cross though..
Re: A Sideways Look
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 5:39 amThanks Sue, fixed now.
Re: A Sideways Look
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 6:39 amExcellent, would make a great stock photo.
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 1:26 pmRe: A Sideways Look
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 4:31 pmReally nice shot. Well lit, her lips are full of zing/twest, and the window shadow is pleasing in the background.
Re: A Sideways Look
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:40 pmGreg
I'm gonna get critical with this one....but in a nice, constructive way. The background is beautiful...the lighting is excellent....the image is sharp and has great colours, nice skintones.The post-processing is sensitive and finely done....but....she is looking out of the picture and showing too much white of eye. Her arms are chopped off and too passive. This would have been a stronger image if she were eyeballing the viewer and her hands were somehow included. Hands can be very expressive. Get her back and do it again.
I'm gonna get critical with this one....but in a nice, constructive way. The background is beautiful...the lighting is excellent....the image is sharp and has great colours, nice skintones.The post-processing is sensitive and finely done....but....she is looking out of the picture and showing too much white of eye. Her arms are chopped off and too passive. This would have been a stronger image if she were eyeballing the viewer and her hands were somehow included. Hands can be very expressive. Get her back and do it again.
Re: A Sideways Look
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 9:05 amMatt. K wrote:...but....she is looking out of the picture and showing too much white of eye. ........This would have been a stronger image if she were eyeballing the viewer....
But Matt, then I would have to think of a new name for the shot
And it would look like the other hundred or so shots I did of her looking straight into the camera
Re: A Sideways Look
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 11:37 amGreg B wrote:Matt. K wrote:...but....she is looking out of the picture and showing too much white of eye. ........This would have been a stronger image if she were eyeballing the viewer....
But Matt, then I would have to think of a new name for the shot
And it would look like the other hundred or so shots I did of her looking straight into the camera
Or get her to hold a small item in her hands (or massive diamond ring), slightly to the side with her looking sideways and slightly down at the item.