Weekender One - Viz-Dan Early Submission

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Weekender One - Viz-Dan Early Submission

Postby Viz on Mon Jan 28, 2008 4:48 pm

Apologies for being early, the crystal ball says I won't be able to do this tomorrow.
Big thanks, Big Red, for the challenge. Thanks Justin for the help, I will never make even the most basic code monkey.

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Re: Weekender One - Viz-Dan Early Submission

Postby Justin on Mon Jan 28, 2008 4:54 pm

Just take the bit with .jpg and add img tags around it... (edit and now I have seen them, love 2 & 3, would like more DOF on the hands in 1)

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Re: Weekender One - Viz-Dan Early Submission

Postby colin_12 on Tue Jan 29, 2008 8:53 am

Just a touch more depth into the fore ground of one would have made this a much better shot imho. Great subject choice.
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Re: Weekender One - Viz-Dan Early Submission

Postby Big Red on Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:32 am

No worries getting in early 8)
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