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Model shots and a few more
Hi Guys,
Had the opportunity to shoot with a model on the weekend and here's one of the results. Whole new world working with flashes and models. Great experience though. I learnt a lot. Love to hear some C&C. There's also a few more here I'd appreciate some help with: http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/   Last edited by Benny2707 on Tue Feb 12, 2008 6:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.
D300 - MB-D10 - Nikkor 80-200mm f/2.8 - Tamron 17-50mm f/2.8 - Nikkor 50mm f/1.8 - SB600
My stuff here http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/
Re: Sarah the model in the rocks
Good setting, face on (her) right seems a bit shadowed for me?
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Re: Sarah the model in the rocks
you also were at the aussie strobist meetup hey?
I did see Sarah until the very end! nice side light - but a bit more light in her face and it would be great!
Re: Sarah the model in the rocks
Yeah I was there, great day. I learnt a lot. The lighting was hard in this scene as it was near on impossible to bounce any of the light coming from her top left back up into her face. With more time we could have but with limited flash guns and from what i have read that is the idea I'm pretty happy with it. D300 - MB-D10 - Nikkor 80-200mm f/2.8 - Tamron 17-50mm f/2.8 - Nikkor 50mm f/1.8 - SB600
My stuff here http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/
Re: Sarah the model in the rocks
NIce image. Apart from the shadow on her face, you also have a pole running through her head!
 I would crop from the top as there is a lot of empty space, causing her to feel a bit lost.Regards, Patrick
Two or three lights, any lens on a light-tight box are sufficient for the realisation of the most convincing image. Man Ray 1935. Our mug is smug
Re: Sarah the model in the rocks
I'm pretty new to the whole PP thing but I'll have a crack and will repost as soon as it's done.
D300 - MB-D10 - Nikkor 80-200mm f/2.8 - Tamron 17-50mm f/2.8 - Nikkor 50mm f/1.8 - SB600
My stuff here http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/
Re: Sarah the model in the rocks
Benny
I was there too but didn't get the chance to shoot any shots of Sarah the light looks a little hot on her left arm and while you are cropping it try rotating it a little to fix the verticals
Re: Sarah the model in the rocks
Here are a few more for your comments and critiques.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/ I'd really appreciate the comments. I've not been shooting for that long and the help really does make a difference. D300 - MB-D10 - Nikkor 80-200mm f/2.8 - Tamron 17-50mm f/2.8 - Nikkor 50mm f/1.8 - SB600
My stuff here http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/
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