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Hi Guys,

Had the opportunity to shoot with a model on the weekend and here's one of the results.

Whole new world working with flashes and models. Great experience though. I learnt a lot.

Love to hear some C&C.

There's also a few more here I'd appreciate some help with: http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/

Good setting, face on (her) right seems a bit shadowed for me?

you also were at the aussie strobist meetup hey?
I did see Sarah until the very end!

nice side light - but a bit more light in her face and it would be great!

jdear wrote:you also were at the aussie strobist meetup hey?
I did see Sarah until the very end!

nice side light - but a bit more light in her face and it would be great!

Yeah I was there, great day. I learnt a lot.

The lighting was hard in this scene as it was near on impossible to bounce any of the light coming from her top left back up into her face. With more time we could have but with limited flash guns and from what i have read that is the idea I'm pretty happy with it.

NIce image. Apart from the shadow on her face, you also have a pole running through her head! I would crop from the top as there is a lot of empty space, causing her to feel a bit lost.

I'm pretty new to the whole PP thing but I'll have a crack and will repost as soon as it's done.

Benny
I was there too but didn't get the chance to shoot any shots of Sarah
the light looks a little hot on her left arm and while you are cropping it try rotating it a little to fix the verticals

Here are a few more for your comments and critiques.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/22767657@N07/

I'd really appreciate the comments. I've not been shooting for that long and the help really does make a difference.