Along the jetty
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:51 pmSpent a very pleasant weekend down the south coast of NSW at a beautiful spot not far from Vincentia...
Here's one I liked...comments welcomed:
Here's one I liked...comments welcomed:
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Along the jetty
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:51 pmRe: Along the jetty
Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:33 pmI like it.... but I think .... no I know I would like it more if you cropped the top of the shot down to the waterline.. in a pano format..
Re: Along the jetty
Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:40 pmI agree with Bindii a pano crop may help this image, but overall I find it a little bland, there seems to be something lacking, the oomph factor (of the stubbsy wow factor), if you know what I mean.
Re: Along the jetty
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:36 amI agree with Bindi and Alpha...
something missing... splash of colour, directional light, point of interest, human element ...not sure what it is.. BTW the jetty in your avatar is top notch!!!
something missing... splash of colour, directional light, point of interest, human element ...not sure what it is.. BTW the jetty in your avatar is top notch!!!
Re: Along the jetty
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:13 amThanks for the comments people - appreciate the feedback!
Re: Along the jetty
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 4:26 pmI agree with some of the comments about it lacking something- maybe you could accentuate this feeling of emptiness or isolation with a degree of desaturation and cropping some of the sky??
Robert
Robert
Re: Along the jetty
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 6:55 pmGreat image, Geoff. I like the tones and reflections!
Alex
Alex
Re: Along the jetty
Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:08 pmI think the horizon is a little too dead centre making the image a little boring. Perhaps some burning might bring out the colours a little more. That's my 2c.