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plane & moon

Postby Pa on Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:55 am

taking a few shots of the moon this morning, saw a small white object, when it flew into the shot i took a couple.

this is the result.

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Re: plane & moon

Postby dviv on Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:25 am

Fantastic Shots Pa!

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Re: plane & moon

Postby stubbsy on Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:33 am

Pa

Lovely image in #1. #2 less so. Generally when framing a shot having something coming into the frame makes for a stronger shot than having something going out of frame. This pair of shots illustrates that maxim beautifully IMHO.
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Re: plane & moon

Postby surenj on Sun Feb 24, 2008 11:28 am

LOVE IT!!! #1 especially...
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Re: plane & moon

Postby petermmc on Sun Feb 24, 2008 11:37 am

Great shot. I like the sharpness and the way you have captured distance and space.
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Re: plane & moon

Postby Louie on Sun Feb 24, 2008 11:46 am

I'm in agreeance with everyone else, #1 is a great capture. Love the composition of it and the perspective between the subjects.


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Re: plane & moon

Postby Pa on Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:08 pm

thanks all...right place right time.

and yes Peter your right. i don't know why i put the 2nd image in the post but it has served a purpose
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Re: plane & moon

Postby Matt. K on Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:20 pm

There's an airport on the moon? :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
Nice shots Pa! :D
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