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Just a Simple HeadshotWould love to know what you think....i know the airbrushing is a little heavy, but its pitched at 'that' market
Thanks for looking Dan
Re: Just a Simple HeadshotI like the shot a lot
but since it is pitched at "that market" you might want to bring her shoulder into line with the rest of the editing as it draws the eye a little, because it looks messy for want of another word
Re: Just a Simple HeadshotIt is quite extreme really. The difference in contrast between the high-key areas of her face and the dark areas of her hair, bikini strap and her eyes is significant. The air-brushing is fine, but I feel the contrast is a touch too much.
Still, I like it. Steve.
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Re: Just a Simple Headshotthis one is a head turner Dan. it caught my eye today on myspace.
agree the should could use some softening, but just fine as it too. I like the intensity of the eye contact, but the whites of her eyes are a little too pure, only a tiny bit though. i really like the soft consistency of the background, and common color throughout the water, frames the beautiful lady very nicely. love your work Dan!
Re: Just a Simple HeadshotThanks Bruce right back at ya!!
Re: Just a Simple HeadshotLooks great to me - very glam and modern. Well done.
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Re: Just a Simple HeadshotI can feel how intense those eyes looking straight at me... yet can't really feel the sexiness here. Maybe it's just me ...
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