Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

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Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:43 pm

I liked the perspective / angle here that makes the Sphinx look so large a pyramid can sit on its back.
I haven't given this my usually processing, as I've been doing some photoshop tutorials and trying to lean some new tricks and techniques in processing the shots. So any feedback on the processing as well as composition would be appreciated.

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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby hyperhiryu on Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:49 pm

That's a great shot and PP. It brings back great memories when I was there a few years back. I assume its taken at Giza?
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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby Pehpsi on Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:02 pm

No critique at all. All A1 from over here. The tones are beautiful and also the clouds.
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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby big pix on Mon Mar 03, 2008 4:44 pm

very nice work....... the sky looks as if is moving....... nice cut and paste...... just add a camel to the background
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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Mar 03, 2008 4:47 pm

Big Pix, nothing was cut and pasted, you are looking at the original shot minus (2 very small people) that I chose to clone out to keep it barren. The PP involved, was curves with a layer mask and also a second layer (30% opacity) with a High Pass filter on it to bring out the detail in the rocks a little.
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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby Killakoala on Mon Mar 03, 2008 5:41 pm

It is really cool and a different look on an 'old' subject ;) Nice work Craig.
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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby big pix on Mon Mar 03, 2008 6:09 pm

Craig you have my public apology......... but it must be the layer mask that gives the cutout effect as you can see where it was applied...... now there is a tool in PS that will fix that, I think it is > layer> matting> defringe........ I would still add the camel

EDIT: ....... or it is >image > Variables > Define

it is one or the other, it has been a long time since I have played in this area......... chris may be able to help
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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:58 pm

Bernie - Apology accepted, but your bright eyes have picked up on my lazy masking job, I should redo it better! thanks for letting me know.
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Re: Egypt - Pyramid and the Sphinx

Postby big pix on Mon Mar 03, 2008 8:23 pm

:lol: :lol: :cheers:
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