The light on her neck is a little distracting (strong) but I don't think it ruins the image. Comments welcomed:
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On the balcony - afternoon sun
It was a rare occasion, I noticed the light outside was beautiful..so I asked Bel who is usually quite shy when it comes to having her photo taken..with some convincing she let me
The light on her neck is a little distracting (strong) but I don't think it ruins the image. Comments welcomed: Geoff
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Nice Geoff, I would probably try and tone down the neck
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I think it could do with a little more contrast. Now, wouldn't this image be better in colour? You have a blurred background possibly with some green, a blond subject with light eyes (green?).
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Thanks guys - will post a colour version asap.
Geoff
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Remember to keep your colouring-in between the lines, Geoff.  g.
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Nice Geoff. Sure Hope Bel like this one too. I'd try burning the neck a little.
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