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Greenes Falls Brisbane

Postby llubnrut on Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:32 pm

Camera: Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL | Date: 18-03-08 | ISO: 400 | Exp. Mode: Aperture priority | Exp. Time: 0.3s | Aperture: 5.0 | Focal Length: 22.0mm (=36mm) | White Balance: Auto white balance | Flash: Flash fired
Does the flash work in this shot or is it too bright? C&C please.

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Re: Greenes Falls Brisbane

Postby digifrog on Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:00 am

Yeah, maybe a little too harsh in the foreground but not far off the mark - I would think a tweak in photoshop could help no end on the foreground (a little burn with burn tool)
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Re: Greenes Falls Brisbane

Postby Grev on Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:06 am

The foreground leafs are way too bright, either tone down the flash exposure or don't use a flash, the pop up flash wouldn't do a very good job at filling the area anyway.
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