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Stralitsia

Postby xerubus on Thu Mar 27, 2008 8:06 pm

A different take on the common Stralitsia. I like it, but does it work for you?

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Re: Stralitsia

Postby Geoff on Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:19 pm

Hi Mark,
When I first looked at this, I wasn't too sure...but after about 30 seconds of REALLY looking at it, it's good!
I like the simplicity of this, as well as the strong contrasting colours...would you consider a squarer crop? (from the top down)? U may think it would lose something from this, but I just put my hand up to 'crop' it and I thought it looked better. Just my thoughts. Keep on posting :)
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Re: Stralitsia

Postby sirhc55 on Thu Mar 27, 2008 10:07 pm

For something that is complex in nature you have achieved a beautiful simplistic photo Mark.
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Re: Stralitsia

Postby surenj on Thu Mar 27, 2008 11:06 pm

Love the colours ... Would it be better against a white background?
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Re: Stralitsia

Postby xerubus on Fri Mar 28, 2008 9:20 am

Geoff... you're right.. a square crop does work on this one. Going to play when I get home.

Cheers Chris.

Surenj.... unfortunately I had to bring the flower indoors because of the rain. There are plenty more in the garden which will have a nice creamy green background at the right angle.. going to give it a go when the weather clears.
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Re: Stralitsia

Postby ozimax on Fri Mar 28, 2008 9:28 am

Great image Mark. I think the black background is fine, a square crop would be interesting, but the thing that strikes me about this photo is the different concept - these photos are very hard to capture with any originality. Well done.

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