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Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Fri Mar 28, 2008 5:12 pm

ok here goes .....i cant remember what order the orginals were.....lol

As good as a shot number one was i had an after thought that maybe it was to personal to display on the forums.....i have taken it down :)

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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby Big Red on Fri Mar 28, 2008 5:40 pm

#1 is a cheeky shot 8)
#2 ok traditional shot :)
#3 is a fun shot 8)
#4 is a nice traditional shot 8)
#5 is a bit bright :)
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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby stubbsy on Fri Mar 28, 2008 5:54 pm

Dan

I'm only seeing one image here. Where are the other three?

As for the one I can see, it's a little bright IMHO - other than that it's a reasonably natural shot. Is that a cream or a white dress - WB looks a touch yellow too.
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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby mickeyjuice on Fri Mar 28, 2008 6:43 pm

I'm sure I saw these images here this morning, but now I see none...
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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby stubbsy on Fri Mar 28, 2008 6:45 pm

Cre8tivepixels wrote:Well as usual its rules for some and not for others...the other three have been deleted by the moderators..ohh well....couldnt be bothered re posting, sorry!

Sorry Dan. This time I deleted the comment above by accident instead of a response I made. In the interest of balance I've quoted your now missing post above.

Please repost your pics - things vanish - but we don't single people out and delete their posts. Usually a post has to be very inflammatory to be deleted.
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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Fri Mar 28, 2008 6:49 pm

Thanks mate for the explanation :)

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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby stubbsy on Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:08 pm

Good to see the images have unvanished Dan (except for the one I commented on - now my brain is hurting). Here is a new critique

#1 - a clever take - not sure it's suitable for the wedding album (will depend on the couple), but definitely a keeper for the happy couple I'm guessing
#2 - nice sharp natural image - has the spontaneity you mention and not over processed (which is a good thing)
#3 - I'm not sure about this - it's got a nice candid feel, but the pole in the background annoys me
#4 - A well captured image and the sepia treatment and image toning works a treat. By far my favourite.

It's good to see other work from you too rather than just the model stuff and the odd ripper lightning pic.
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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby ozczecho on Fri Mar 28, 2008 10:57 pm

New name mate....

I think #1 is cool...a nice refreshing wedding pic...beautifully done...fit even for the wedding album....errm maybe

Love the last one...great tones.
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Re: Weddings and Spontaineity

Postby mickeyjuice on Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:38 pm

They're back! :-)

#4 for me, and #2 is excellent as well. I nearly really like #1 - but the expression looks kinda unnatural. (To me anyway, but I could be full of it :-)
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