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Hobart - Constitution dock

PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 1:49 pm
by Justin
Hi, just got back from my hike of the overland track. Just running through my images, and this one just leapt out at me, from the very end of the trip at hobart..

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Re: Hobart - Constitution dock

PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 3:51 pm
by Killakoala
I reckon if your were to try and crop much tighter, around the red boat with it's sublime reflection, it would look even better.

Re: Hobart - Constitution dock

PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 4:22 pm
by Geoff
A beautiful shot Justin.
I agree with Steve about the tighter crop suggestion, and also - did u apply a vignette to this? Not sure if it suits it (if you have).

Re: Hobart - Constitution dock

PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 4:33 pm
by Justin
Here's the tighter crop - and no vignette applied. Taken with a 28mm full frame lens IIRC

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Re: Hobart - Constitution dock

PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 7:34 pm
by Killakoala
It is an improvement, but I would prefer to see an even tighter crop. The far end of Salamanca wharf on the right just does not belong in the image. I feel it contrasts too greatly with the subject, the red boat. I would crop so that only the red boat and it's reflection are the subject. The rest is superfluous and tends to make my eyes wander around the image rather than focus on the subject. That's how I would do it anyway.

Re: Hobart - Constitution dock

PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 1:23 pm
by Justin
I've updated - you should see the new version in the posts above. Tough one to decide on correct crop, once I went portrait it fell into place a little better.