Coal River - Summer becomes Autumn with Layers.

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Coal River - Summer becomes Autumn with Layers.

Postby Killakoala on Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:00 pm

I've been wondering for a couple of months what I could do to the following image to make it look better.

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It's an HDR image of five combined images of Coal River in Tasmania, showing in the distance, the Richmond Bridge.

I felt that the overall feel of the image was that there was far too much green in it.

I was playing around with it in Photoshop today and I happened upon a filter in the Nik Filter suite that I have that I have not used before. It is called Indian Summer. It very nicely converts greens into corresponding shades of brown. Problem was that rather than my image looking too green, it now looked too brown.

So I did what anyone would do. I created two layers, one as the original and one with the filter and erased some of the brown to reveal green until I was satisfied I had a good balance.

The resulting image now looks like I had shot it in Autumn. With a bit of cropping and cloning and some adjustments to contrast, the image looks much more like what I would have liked it to.

Some energy police would say this is cheating, but I feel that it isn't. It's my own artistic impression of a scene that is real. It existed at one point in time and now my memory has interpreted it differently. It's my mind and I can do that if I want. :)

Here is the completed image;
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Re: Coal River - Summer becomes Autumn with Layers.

Postby surenj on Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:17 pm

Nicely done...Definitely an improvement to the original. I like it... You could make another: with snow (I have seen a few tutorials on the net how to do that)
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Re: Coal River - Summer becomes Autumn with Layers.

Postby Killakoala on Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:26 pm

Great idea Surenj. Turn it into winter ;) I'll give it a quick go.

Using three layers, a green, a brown and one converted to B&W Infra-red. I adjusted the opacity of the layers and did some erasing to get this. A quick saturation adjustment and resize.

Not exactly snow but a very heavy frost. :)

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Re: Coal River - Summer becomes Autumn with Layers.

Postby Justin on Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:13 pm

Ha, that last one is magical, where are the pixies?

I just feel that the first one is a little soft, the tone in the green is lovely though.
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Re: Coal River - Summer becomes Autumn with Layers.

Postby cobby1 on Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:18 pm

Thats Awsome Mate & no i dont think it is cheating :up:

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