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Homework

Postby kiwi on Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:08 am

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I love Stephens concentration in this and the colours

By the way, I consider this the sharpest portrait shot I have ever taken. The resize may not do it justice.

All courtesy of the little Nikkor 50 1.8
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Re: Homework

Postby BullcreekBob on Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:19 pm

I have a black background when looking at this forum. The huge white border on your image is very distracting and I find myself looking at the border not the image. When I force myself to focus on the image it is great, I love the coloues and the sharpnes, then I start looking at the white page and his writing then I look at the border.

Sorry but I must be a moth, I am drawn to the light.
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Re: Homework

Postby kiwi on Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:26 pm

oh really, a black background ? I did not know that you could change it.

Mines a light blue/grey, so I can see why the white border would be distracting on yours, certainly not my intent.
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Re: Homework

Postby kiwi on Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:27 pm

ooohhh, just changed mine to Nikon Glass. Groooovy.
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Re: Homework

Postby kiwi on Wed Apr 23, 2008 1:40 pm

Oh, and removed the border on the picture

Now, quick question, why do I have little red x boxes on the page (eg just left of the word portal at the top)
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Re: Homework

Postby Steffen on Wed Apr 23, 2008 2:51 pm

Nice shot, I like how the concentration shows on the face.

kiwifamily wrote:Now, quick question, why do I have little red x boxes on the page (eg just left of the word portal at the top)


Yes, me too. I'm guessing the Nikon theme is missing a few images.

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Re: Homework

Postby Bindii on Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:21 pm

kiwifamily wrote:ooohhh, just changed mine to Nikon Glass. Groooovy.


So its all blurry then?.. :P

Great dof on this subject... love the look of concentration on his face! :)
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