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Night Shoot - pt2

Postby Yi-P on Sun May 18, 2008 12:05 am

Here is the 2nd part of the shoot, getting too cold by then here and its started to rain :(


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Re: Night Shoot - pt2

Postby Geoff on Sun May 18, 2008 12:22 am

Very nice work Yi-p!!
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Re: Night Shoot - pt2

Postby surenj on Sun May 18, 2008 11:07 pm

awesome first shot. IF you could bring out a bit more detail of the photographer that would be great.
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Re: Night Shoot - pt2

Postby biggerry on Mon May 19, 2008 1:53 pm

Nice pictures, I really like foreground and the concrete join line seems to draw you to the photographer. They both really capture the evening - the photographer and the place!
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Re: Night Shoot - pt2

Postby Yi-P on Mon May 19, 2008 11:12 pm

Thank you everyone for their input :D

surenj wrote:awesome first shot. IF you could bring out a bit more detail of the photographer that would be great.


The photographer is actually out of focus. But that's for the comment, I will try that when I have time :D
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Re: Night Shoot - pt2

Postby dervish on Mon May 19, 2008 11:47 pm

great pics Yi-p, love the composition and the colours and clarity you got, and i know who the photographer is too :D
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Re: Night Shoot - pt2

Postby Pehpsi on Tue May 20, 2008 6:27 pm

First is great. I remember shooting there and being told not to sell any!
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Re: Night Shoot - pt2

Postby Shoot on Tue May 20, 2008 10:41 pm

I prefer the first one also... yep, its funny there were a few security guards buzzing around a bit at the time too.. I would have thought that we would be told to shove off, but I guess maybe they were more concerned (as most of us were) in getting out of the cold :-p
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