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Dark Industry
Posted:
Fri May 23, 2008 12:37 pm
by sirhc55
Open to C&C. Converted through Nik Efex 3 to B&W
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Fri May 23, 2008 12:39 pm
by bwhinnen
I don't know Chris, I like it, but it seems as if something is missing, and I just can't put my finger on it.
Like the treatment as well.
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Fri May 23, 2008 12:51 pm
by sirhc55
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Sat May 24, 2008 12:38 pm
by surenj
Add some smoke to make it more animated and make sure it's still doing dark things to the environment..
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Sat May 24, 2008 12:58 pm
by Pehpsi
I rather like this one. There's plenty of gadgets to look at and the contrasty conversion looks great.
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Sat May 24, 2008 2:39 pm
by Oneputt
Whilst I love B&W this is just a little too contrasty for my taste
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Sun May 25, 2008 2:36 am
by adhoc
I like your black and white conversion. The high contrast enhances your "dark industry" theme a lot. Well the only thing missing I find is the smoke or rather the pollution. Maybe you can add it in yourself =D
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Sun May 25, 2008 11:33 am
by sirhc55
Thanks to everyone for your input - the reason for no smoke is simple, this is a concrete distribution complex with nothing to produce the smoke
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Sun May 25, 2008 8:13 pm
by Reschsmooth
Chris, I like everything about this.
1. The composition is spot on and suits the structure.
2. The B&W conversion is great - I like the really dark sky and the contrast.
3. The clouds really suit the dark nature of it.
Re: Dark Industry
Posted:
Sun May 25, 2008 8:33 pm
by sirhc55
Thanks Patrick - it was a straight B&W conversion through Nik Efex 3. The colour version was awful