A couple pictures from France

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A couple pictures from France

Postby glamy on Fri Jun 20, 2008 2:44 pm

Here are a couple images I am pretty happy with. I am happy with the way I framed the chapel (it is something I am not good at ) and with the other one for the atmosphere. Having someone sitting on the bench would have helped, I think.
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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby surenj on Fri Jun 20, 2008 2:47 pm

Second one has a lot of potential! My suggestions are the make it a bit dreamy , maybe replace the sky or at least remove the CA and do bit of dodge and burn to make it like a fairytale which is what I would assume you saw....
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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby TonyT on Fri Jun 20, 2008 4:00 pm

I like both of them
In 1 I would take the white crossing lines out
When you look at it my eyes travel down there
But good shots any way
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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby Killakoala on Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:54 am

That second image is very nice Gerard. So green. I can see myself sitting on that bench soaking in the atmosphere for hours.
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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby glamy on Sat Jun 21, 2008 4:19 pm

Thanks for the comments. I was in two minds about the pedestrian crossing in the first, I thought it emphasised the curve in the road and sort of lead to the chapel. Yes it was green everywhere, so much rain...
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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby Alex on Sun Jun 22, 2008 8:48 pm

Love the colours in the 2nd one. Nice use of WA in the 1st image.

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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby stubbsy on Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:58 pm

Gerard

Both of these images are great. In #1 I'll be honest and say I didn't even notice the corssing until I saw the comment on it so to me it's no big deal. I was too busy admiring the rest of what the image offers. As for #2 - while I like it I'd be interested in seeing a dreamy soft focus treatment which I think may suit this.
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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby Dipstix Pix on Tue Jun 24, 2008 6:49 pm

I do like the first one (sure I've seen a similar church in the Barossa Velley) and the very first thing I did notice was the crossing - but I think it actually led my eye into the centre of the pic.
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Re: A couple pictures from France

Postby glamy on Tue Jun 24, 2008 8:51 pm

Thanks for the constructive comments, very much appreciated.
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