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At the Park

PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:25 pm
by Jase555
I feel my shots are starting to improve... CC please.

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Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:52 pm
by Pa
last 2 have my attention...well done

Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:05 pm
by Dave-D40
Nice set of shots i like them all but think #2 would be good without the swan to the left. :up:

Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:47 am
by Jase555
Thanks for the advice Dave, was trying to convey some sort of relationship between the swans, but I guess that didn't really work... :?

Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 12:50 pm
by seeto.centric
nice pictures Jase555, where were these swans? Hardly see them around sydney but then again i hardly go out looking for such things.

Personally i wouldnt mind a bit more sharpness but that just my taste.

-j

Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 1:53 pm
by paulmac
Dave-D40 wrote:Nice set of shots i like them all but think #2 would be good without the swan to the left. :up:


I disagree, Dave. I love the shallow depth of field. The other swan in the image places the first in context.

Nice work.

Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 2:16 pm
by Aussie Dave
Jase,
I'm not sure if it's my monitor here at work or not, but these photos seem to be a little dark (to me), except for maybe no. 2.

No. 3 is the standout for me, though I would have liked to see more definition on the swan (it's a touch too underexposed - for my liking anyway)....though I do know how hard it is to expose for black (or white) swans :)

Just as a suggestion for no.4, which is a cute photo BTW, try taking the shot with the subject off-centre (in case of this image, with her to the left of centre) so it looks like she is running into the shot.

I also don't mind the shallow DOF and can see where you were heading with that photo.

Hope you find this constructive :)

Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:56 pm
by Jase555
seeto.centric wrote:nice pictures Jase555, where were these swans? Hardly see them around sydney but then again i hardly go out looking for such things.


This is close to where I live, Clinches Pond, Moorebank.

Thanks for the tips - debate over #2 proves that beauty is really in the eye of the beholder. A good shot to one person may not be to another...

Re: At the Park

PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:07 pm
by wheels
Had a crack at shooting swans this morning Jase (before one had a crack at me :shock: ). They aren't a easy thing to photograph especially considering their colour. Nice shots mate.