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Simple portraitsWell with no weddings during the winter season I decided to get back to basics and shoot a few simple portraits with a friend. I decided to leave my lighting equipment and all that entails and leave the posing natural and uncomplicated. Man the simple things in life are often the best
Enjoy!
Re: Simple portraitsi would have liked to see a bit more light on her face in the first one. turning into the light may have brought a more balanced lighting result imo.
#2 and #3 are very special. absolutely beautiful shots. EM1 l 7.5 l 12-40 l 14 l 17 l 25 l 45 l 60 l 75 l AW1 l V3
Re: Simple portraitsVery nice shots your photos give me a sense that I'm looking at one of those lifestyle magazines pictures I like all of them simple yet effective, what lens you using for those shots ?
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Re: Simple portraitsSome nice shot there. I particularly like the lighting setup in no. 1. Well executed.
D700, 50 1.8, 14-24 2.8, 24-70 2.8, 70-200VR, 80-400VR, SB800 plus a lot of gadgets
Re: Simple portraitsVery nice all of them. I like each one for different reasons and I think you should feel proud of them.
Re: Simple portraitsI like #1 best, because it has a lot of athmosphere and it's not so "lifestylish".
Why did you choose to have the lips sharp but the eyes soft in #3? Cheers, Peter
Re: Simple portraitsWell done on some great pics. My Favourite has to go to number 2 and then 4 with pic 1 taking up the minor placings.
Rainy days and a little imagination can still give great results. Nice work. Cheers Jase hrpremier 4869 Guess What! ........I Have A Fever........And The Only Perscription........Is More Cowbell.
Re: Simple portraitsThanks everyone for the kind comments. To answer the questions:
Catcha: The first and last pic was with a 70-200 2.8 IS while #2 and #3 was with the 24-70 Barry: I know you didn't ask a question but just wanna clarify the 'lighting setup' I really had no special lights to play with. All I had to use was the dimmer lights on the ceiling and a lamp with a flexible neck from the left. Peter: While I was framing close to her face, I noticed that she had really gorgeous lips, so I decide to focus on that instead.
Re: Simple portraitsNice work Ronald. I just had a look at your smugmug site and you do nice stuff. You don't always have to have all the bells and whistles to create great shots.
Re: Simple portraitsWith the photo of the mouth in focus, maybe if you lowered the watermark to the mouth it would draw attention away from the out of focus eye.
But hey, what would i know, right?
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Thanks for the comment RDW. Your right and this is what the session was all about. Make do with just the basics and see what I'll get. Obviously these were process to make them look how I want them to look but getting an excellent exposure is the 1st step into creating a beautiful image.
Mate, I take into account peoples feedback regardless of their skill levels in photography. Don't feel discourage. By all mean comment and critique my work as sometimes, we as photographers get too close to our projects that we may miss certain details or think of ideas that may have made a good photo into a great one. Trust me I've had times that people with no eye for photography would say something that makes me say "Geez, your right. Why didn't I think of that?"
Re: Simple portraitsThe 2nd photograph is absolutely stunning. Just had to say that. Her eyes looks beautiful!
Re: Simple portraits#1 is a really simple and elegant photo. Well done.
Re: Simple portraitsExcellent photos, Ron.
No. 2 is my favourite. Beautiful use of DoF, well composed and B&w really works here. The model looks really at east and her expression is very natural. No. 1 I really like the pose and looks like you've achieve a great result with ambient light. The last one is a great lifestyle shot. Nice bright colours and naturally looking portrait. The only critique I have is the out-of-focus section of the couch in the foreground is a tad destractive, but that's a matter of taste. Well done. Alex
Re: Simple portraitsOne word Ron FAB! Inspiring stuff!
Jethro shoot it real.
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