Auburn Minimeet - My take.

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Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby wheels on Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:02 am

Had a good day at Auburn, nice to meet everyone. Here are a few of my photos from the day. As always feel free to criticise as required:

1. The Reflection Pool. Day was really overcast which made for a not so reflective pool. I've mucked around with this a bit to try and bring an otherwise boring photo to life.

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2. These Jonquils were just along the path from the reflection pool.

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3. Rotting Log

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4. Abstract leaf pattern Umbrella tree

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Enjoy
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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby Bindii on Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:16 am

Loving those leaves... :)
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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby biggerry on Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:30 am

hey wheels, nice pictures, I really like the log one - a different perspective, I remember you getting down and dirty to capture that - above and beyond the call of duty....well framed also imo, you have all the log in the picture and a suitable amount of surrounding stuff to frame it nicely....

I also like the Jonquils ( I only now know what type there are!) nice crisp whites.

The reflection pool is a hard one to shoot imo - any slight variation in the symmetry or angle of lines really throws the picture out, I have to say yours turned out better than mine.....
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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby ozimax on Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:56 pm

Really nice pictures Wheels, especially the 1st one. Sorry I couldn't make it, maybe next time!

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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby surenj on Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:35 pm

I like the pool photo. I think it's a perfect candidate to replace the sky!!
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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby Matt. K on Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:24 pm

First image does not work for me because I don't know what to look at. What's the subject?
Next 3 images are big, strong and have lots of impact. Are you left handed? (It's a style thing). They fill the frame and not a pixel is wasted.
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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby wheels on Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:39 pm

Thanks for the comments guys. The jury seems to be out on the Reflection Pool. Maybe my PP was a bit too much, I know that sometimes people don't like to have the PP quite as blatant and other don't mind.
I do see your point Matt - there doesn't seem to be a singular point of interest in the shot. I kinda tried to create one (the pool). It would quite possibly be a more powerful photo with a decent sky or a statue or something larger at the far end of the pool.
In answer to the lefty call - I'm kinda weirdly ambidexterous. There are some things I can do equally well both hands (cricket bat, snooker, photography, computer mouse) and other that I have to use my right hand for (writing). Why?
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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby Benny2707 on Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:43 pm

Love the second shot. I really like it a lot. Very light and bright.

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Re: Auburn Minimeet - My take.

Postby wheels on Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:53 am

Benny2707 wrote:Love the second shot. I really like it a lot. Very light and bright.

Great shot.


Thanks Benny. I think the poor light kinda helped with some of these. (obviously not the reflection shot :D ). If it had of been a sunny day the white flowers wouldn't have turned out so well and the log would have been damn near impossible to get right in a dappled rainforest style setting. All I did for the flowers was overexpose by half a stop to get the white really white. Had the sun been on them I don't think it would be anywhere near as nice.
I'm still curious about this left handed thing :shock:
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