Baby Photographs - Jacob

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Baby Photographs - Jacob

Postby daniel81 on Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:11 pm

These are the pick of my first attempts at some 'printable' shots of my month old baby boy...

Some PP has been done in Lightroom.

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Re: Baby Photographs - Jacob

Postby Geoff on Wed Jul 16, 2008 7:02 pm

Fantastic shots Dan...what a gorgeous boy you've got. I can't imagine how many million photos I will take when our time comes! (no, Bel's not pregnant yet hehe).
These both look a tad under exposed on my (calibrated) monitor and I'd like to see a bit more saturation in both. Keep em coming, and congrats mate, is this no.1 ?
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Re: Baby Photographs - Jacob

Postby daniel81 on Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:04 pm

yeah no. 1... lots of work but worth every second.

yeah they do look slightly underexposed now you mention it.
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Re: Baby Photographs - Jacob

Postby chrisk on Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:09 pm

congrats on the boy first of all mate. like you said, lotsa work but worth every second.
i think the first one looks good, i agree with Geoff, the second is a tad underexposed. nothing a quick curves bump cant fix. looks like your light source is behind his face, maybe is you spot metered off his shadowed face it would have bump up your exposure a little...couldnt you get him to co operate and turn around ? lol :P

they are quite desaturated, not sure if that was your intention or not. personally, i quite like it.
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Re: Baby Photographs - Jacob

Postby surenj on Wed Jul 16, 2008 9:53 pm

Congratulations... Love these ...
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