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Melb's Laneways
Posted:
Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:24 pmby makario
Here is my take on Melb's Laneways... I am looking for comments and critiques from the forum. Click on image for larger view
*EDIT 20-Jul-2008* - based on the feedback from the forum, I have rolled back my harsh PP to show more of a human factor as below. click for a larger image.
Thanks for taking a look
Re: Melb's Laneways
Posted:
Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:31 pmby Glen
Makario, I like it but wonder if it would hold more interest with someone or something in the foreground. Maybe a person in the foreground, or a lower angle to make the paving more of a feature? I would probably straighten the building just a fraction.
Re: Melb's Laneways
Posted:
Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:37 pmby makario
didnt even notice the building being at an angle!!! sheesh after all that pp work, maybe I should turn on gridlines
Re: Melb's Laneways
Posted:
Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:19 pmby surenj
with the addition of a human factor...it looks a bit deserted and lonely...
Re: Melb's Laneways
Posted:
Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:39 amby Greg B
Mak, could you pull any more detail out of the shadows? There are people in there......
I think the shot has potential.
Re: Melb's Laneways
Posted:
Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:53 amby Shoot
I agree with Greg, kinda me feel 'absent and lonely' unless thats what you're going for? I think pulling some more detail from the shadows would help a great deal...
-Rob.
