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A couple of portraits
Posted:
Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:02 pm
by Alex
A couple of portraits taken at a shoot I did a few weeks back.
Thanks for looking,
Alex
Re: A couple of portraits
Posted:
Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:40 pm
by barry
Alex, I like #1 however I think if you cropped the bottom quarter of the shot it would look better. The reclining pose looks a bit funny to me.
As for #2 to me there does not seem to be any focal point.
Re: A couple of portraits
Posted:
Tue Aug 05, 2008 2:07 pm
by Alex
Thanks for your comments, Barry.
Regards,
Alex
Re: A couple of portraits
Posted:
Tue Aug 05, 2008 7:25 pm
by zafra52
I agree with Barry. Crop it from the end of her hair removing the bottom part.
Re: A couple of portraits
Posted:
Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:05 pm
by Alex
Thanks for the suggestion guys. I have tried it and it just didn't look right.
Cheers
Alex