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Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 6:48 pm
by surenj
Recent excursion to Gloucester near Newcastle... Saw this old truck which was screaming out to be photographed...
Didn't quite capture what I really saw, so had to manipulate it...just a little bit.. Critique as always welcome...

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Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 8:37 pm
by Geoff
Wow...this is splendid!!
Looks almost HDR, great job!!!

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 8:40 pm
by surenj
It is HDR Geoff, I tried to light it with my 430EX but simply wasn't enough..would have been handy to have a few lights, battery packs, a small crew and a truck to carry them in.. :mrgreen:

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:10 pm
by main identity
terrific photo love it

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:23 am
by carla_d
it's beautiful. a really great capture.
the only comment i have is about the shadow on the mountains in the background. the line of the shadow doesn't look completely natural. did you retouch there?

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 10:14 am
by gstark
While I like it a lot ....

I'd like to see some of the foreground cropped from this. (Think pano style)

And it'd be nice with a bit less space on the left, and a touch more of the buildings on the right brought into the frame.

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 12:40 pm
by surenj
carla_d wrote:it's beautiful. a really great capture.
the only comment i have is about the shadow on the mountains in the background. the line of the shadow doesn't look completely natural. did you retouch there?


Yes I replaced the whole sky with a sunset I took the next day in the same area (not the same location). Unfortunately when I took the +2 -2 bracketed shots, I didn't realise that the sun was getting blown out in the even most underexposed shot. So couldn't recover any detail there. Wish I had done a +5 -5 but I won't get a second chance though.

It was a 2 hour edit to get the sky replaced... Which area of the mountains don't look natural?

gstark wrote:While I like it a lot ....

I'd like to see some of the foreground cropped from this. (Think pano style)

And it'd be nice with a bit less space on the left, and a touch more of the buildings on the right brought into the frame.

Will try and repost Gary. Although the buildings to the left don't convey the same old look as the truck.

Thanks for all your comments.

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 1:30 pm
by sirhc55
Without any technical reasons I just love this shot :up:

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:03 pm
by stubbsy
This is a kick arse image. The work you've done on it is well worth it for this result. Tiny niggle is I'd like it more centred (crop from right and bottom a touch), but hey I'm a neat and in the middle kinda guy :wink:

Re: Any mechanics out there who can fix this?

PostPosted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:17 pm
by Matt. K
This image is wonderfully atmospheric and sets a real mood. The colours are dreamlike and the truck maintains a dignity despite its condition and age. A beautifully created image!