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Models in Fur

Postby CraigVTR on Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:03 pm

My wife makes a teddy bear when a child is born in our families and the bear is given to the parents/child as a keepsake. She has several bears that have never left home so they had a get together with the latest bear before he was depatched off to live my my nephews new child. Now that I have the d300 and some time off work I decided to break out the Golden Eagle lights and have a model shoot. The models were very easy to work with, never complained and even held a pose while I went off and had lunch.

The stars of the shoot. Click for larger images.

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and the setup.
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These shots are jpegs straight from the camera but I would appreciate some feedback on the lighting. I have not done any crops or adjustment, shot at 160 @f8 strobes on their lowest setting.
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Re: Models in Fur

Postby sheepie on Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:21 pm

I'm by no means an expert at lighting, but I'd suggest pulling the light on the left back a little.

Really like the poses on the individual pics.

Love the bears too - they look fantastic :) I'll be keeping an eye on this thread as I want to do the same with my bears when I finally get to it!
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Re: Models in Fur

Postby kitchenwench on Mon Sep 01, 2008 10:04 pm

I ADORE those teddy bears :) I'm no lighting expert, but to my amateur/untrained eye, it looks like the right side is a little flat in terms of lighting...perhaps bringing it forward more so it's about a 45-60 degree angle to the teddy bears? :)
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Re: Models in Fur

Postby BullcreekBob on Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:07 pm

I like 'em Craig.

Which lighting kit is this?

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Re: Models in Fur

Postby CraigVTR on Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:06 am

BullcreekBob wrote:I like 'em Craig.

Which lighting kit is this?

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The lights are the Golden Eagle 3 light kit you buy through Poon. Great lights easy to use and come with a compact carry bag.
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Re: Models in Fur

Postby big pix on Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:43 am

Craig....... overall your lighting is fine, but a tad flat........

now....... move the soft box to 45o to subject or just off your left shoulder and a tad higher, angle a bit down, could do with a bit more power output as this will become your main light.........

............... pull the other front light back a little, away from subject as it is a fill light.......

............... put the light at the back, behind subjects, and higher and lift the head so the light skims your subjects, you may have to increase the power of this one to get the rim light effect on your subjects, this is a soft effect and a balance act between the front and back light,

................ just be careful you are not shooting direct into one of your flash heads

hope this helps as it is a basic lighting set up for small products........
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Re: Models in Fur

Postby CraigVTR on Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:16 am

Thanks Bernie. I will give that a try.

I am practising on smallish objects as a friend wants some baby photos done.
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Re: Models in Fur

Postby BullcreekBob on Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:13 pm

CraigVTR wrote:Bob
The lights are the Golden Eagle 3 light kit you buy through Poon. Great lights easy to use and come with a compact carry bag.


Thanks, I thought they were :)

I am about to spend some money for lighting so I hope you don't mind another question, Why did you choose lights rather than flashes?

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Re: Models in Fur

Postby CraigVTR on Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:26 pm

Bob
I have two sb800 which I plan to use for outdoor portraits when I learn how to use them properly, I think they may be overkill in the tech dept for me. I wanted to get the studio lights so I had an alternative to the sb800 and they were inexpensive, a three light kit cheaper than one sb800. They are still compact but come will all the accesoriess such as the stands, umbrellas, barndoors, gells, softboxes etc.

Good luck with your purchase.
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