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Holden

Postby main identity on Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:33 pm

couple taken late one night
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Re: Holden

Postby Raskill on Sat Sep 20, 2008 11:32 pm

Both of the images are a couple of stops under exposed. I think 2 is the stronger image, with a better angle, showing the aggressive lines of the commodore. What were your camera settings?

If you find a good shot in low light and no tripod, try to find something to brace/balance your camera on. This angle would have still worked with your camera on a bundled up jacket or something on the ground. Your white balance seems a tad off, with your whites a tad yellow.
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Re: Holden

Postby main identity on Sun Sep 21, 2008 8:45 am

using an olympus sp550 uz
exposure time 2.5
f.number f5.6
manual mode
iso 200

same for both photos
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