Moody Lingerie Set

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Moody Lingerie Set

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Sep 21, 2008 12:35 pm

Thanks for looking - trying to get more uniformity in my images....so these are designed too sit together like lego :)

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Thanks for looking hope you all have a cracking Sunday :)

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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby olrac on Sun Sep 21, 2008 12:52 pm

I like them all but one issue that is not really an issue where is the Lingerie?

Oh and maybe a little too much added grain/noise in the first one.
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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby Geoff on Sun Sep 21, 2008 1:04 pm

Tasteful, provocative and sexy Dan (the pics, not you my friend) :D

I disagree that the first one is too noisy/grainy.

I think the third one in this series is my favourite.

I think I'd like to see even MORE contrast in all of them.

Great work, again. It seems to me that you've toned down the slutty feel and upped your recent work to a more tasteful and arty composition etc.
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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby sirhc55 on Sun Sep 21, 2008 1:53 pm

#1 - Great pose and lighting

#2 - Needs to be cropped closer and I find the two tone background distracting

#3 - Very nice close crop and pose

#4 - My favourite although I would clone out the horizontal line on the wall at bottom right
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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby Matt. K on Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:17 pm

The first 2 have a lovely, nostalgic, Hollywood style about them. They remind me of pictures of Marilyn Munroe taken by Elliot Erwitt. Nice work!
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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby CraigVTR on Sun Sep 21, 2008 5:27 pm

Great work Dan
I like all of them. #2 I agree about a closer crop but I like the two tone background.
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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby snappd on Sun Sep 21, 2008 5:50 pm

#1 & 4 are my favourites......just because I like the moodiness that the lighting creates.....which is why you called it 'Moody Lingerie set' I guess! Those two just seem moodier than 2 and 3 for that reason.

Love looking at your work by the way...

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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby marcotrov on Sun Sep 21, 2008 6:04 pm

Great work Dan Love the way you have worked each image and the mood created works well with each. Really like the first.
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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Sep 21, 2008 8:35 pm

Thanks guys :)

Thank you also sirhc55 always value your ideas and crit :)

I guess by design it is a lingerie set but in the stricter sense of the word it may not :)

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Re: Moody Lingerie Set

Postby Catcha on Tue Sep 23, 2008 7:51 pm

I like the grainy effect of the first one...all great shots
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