I Fixed Up My Horizon.

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I Fixed Up My Horizon.

Postby mic on Fri Feb 25, 2005 11:50 pm

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Thanks to all that helped me with this, and to sirhc55 for pointing it out in the first place.
I managed to adjust my Horizon a little tweek :lol:

Hope you like. :D

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Postby JordanP on Fri Feb 25, 2005 11:58 pm

Perfect :)
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Postby leek on Sat Feb 26, 2005 4:29 am

I like... Nice shot...

Did you already tell us there this was taken??? I'd like to know...
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Postby dooda on Sat Feb 26, 2005 5:17 am

I never saw the original. This is as perfect a shot that I see posted here. It's so nicely finished you should definitly blow it up and frame it and sell it. Exquisite job.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Feb 26, 2005 7:10 am

This is a lovely image :)
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Postby mudder on Sat Feb 26, 2005 7:45 am

I love the colors and softness to the water... This is worth a large print for sure!

Don't remember the original so I can't compare but this is terrific...

Out of curiosity, is this a crop at all?

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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Feb 26, 2005 10:11 am

This shot is almost alien and I like it very much - superb colour and the horizon is straight :roll:
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Postby mic on Sat Feb 26, 2005 10:41 am

Thanks fellers,

Leek, it is a place called Cape Woolamai, near Phillip Island Vic.

Jordan P, Thank you :wink:

dooda, Thank you :wink:

cricketfan, Thank you :wink:

mudder, Thank you :wink: A slight Crop just after I made the horizon straight. Very slight.

sirhc55, Thank you :wink: :D
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Postby Killakoala on Sat Feb 26, 2005 9:21 pm

What an excellent picture you have there. Well done on creating a silouhette of the rocks mid-frame and still getting some detail on the beach. The colour looks great too. Almost what i imagine Mars would have looked like with liquid water on it's surface.

http://www.planetary.org might be interested in that kind of concept. :) They have a montly magazine that has art work on the back cover. I reckon that image could happily grace the back cover.
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Postby Manta on Sat Feb 26, 2005 9:26 pm

Great shot Mic!

The lighting gives it such a moodiness; spooky actually.

The large outcrop on the right seems to be creeping forward to engulf the smaller ones.... :shock:
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Postby rokkstar on Sat Feb 26, 2005 9:27 pm

Yeah, I agree, really superb Mic. Lovely image. Well balanced and well composed. Where was this taken?

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Postby christiand on Sat Feb 26, 2005 9:45 pm

I also am in love with that photo.
What consideration did you take regarding exposure, if I may ask.
Did you shoot raw (NEF) ?
What PP did you do if any ?
I am just intriged how what I percieve to be a high contrast shot can turn out so great.
Surely there has to be a (trick) secret, or I'm not getting it.
It would be great if you or somebody would like to enlighten me and the rest of the world in how to do those photos.

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Postby Onyx on Sat Feb 26, 2005 10:45 pm

It's beautiful Mic. Wonderful and warm image... and I think you got the shutter speed just right, the water's not blurred beyond distinction but soft enough to compliment the scene.
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Postby mic on Sun Feb 27, 2005 12:57 pm

Wow :o

Thanks guys, it a wonderfull feeling when you work on a shot and it works and a lot of people like it :D

Thanks Killa :wink: Your link sounds interesting but I cant get it to work ?

Thanks Manta :wink:

Thanks Rokkstar :wink: Taken at Cape Woolamai, near Phillip Island Vic

Thanks CD :wink: Well I made the aperture small, I'll have to check tonight actually what I used with low light this allows you to get a long shutter speed 1 or 2 secs combine with fast moving waves & a Tripod of course = Presto :shock:

I did a little PP, A bit of Saturation, slight burn on the sky to cut down the glare a bit.
All in all not a lot of PP.
Shoot in RAW all the time.
You just have to get out and experiment with a few shots and the right light conditions and you might get a couple of nice ones.

I'm glad you liked it :)

Thanks Onyx :wink:

Yes I agree, just the right amount for the shutter

Thank you to all who commented and enjoyed, I'll have to keep up my standard some how now.

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Postby PlatinumWeaver on Tue Mar 08, 2005 10:52 am

Mate, that's a great shot!
Any chance of getting EXIF info?
Was this tripod mounted or handheld?
What was the shutter speed ( slow i'm guessing looking at the water )?

Damn nice shot, congrats on the potw.
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Postby mic on Tue Mar 08, 2005 11:02 am

I'll find out tonight for you PW,

Tripod used, yes.

Thanks a lot.

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