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Flight....Sculptures by the Sea

Postby aim54x on Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:19 pm

Here are some of my efforts from Monday evening's meet. Great to place a few more faces to names!

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Re: Flight....Sculptures by the Sea

Postby DJT on Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:38 am

love the last 2.
I made the mistake of going in the morning, just as the first school bus arrived & then the blue rinse brigade turned up just behind them
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Re: Flight....Sculptures by the Sea

Postby biggerry on Thu Oct 30, 2008 2:14 pm

I prefer #1 over #2 because the direction of flight is into the sunset, however I prefer the position of the wings in #2!

I think if you straighten #1 it will be a cracker.....(make horizon level and pole perpendicular)

The composition in #4 is perfect, I took 3 or 4 pictures of this but you have definitely captured the lines in a better form. it really looks like the object on the left is suspended in air. The hint of red of the anodized surface tops it off, nice one!
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Re: Flight....Sculptures by the Sea

Postby aim54x on Thu Oct 30, 2008 2:28 pm

Thanks Gerry, if I remember I'll straighten #1 later.
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