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Blue virgin

PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 6:37 pm
by surenj
For your critique. :mrgreen:



Image


Sorry if you expected something else... :D

Re: Blue virgin

PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 7:05 pm
by hamster
I don't like the orientation simply because the wing's chopped off. I always liked my planes to have both wings. Gives me a sense of safety.

Re: Blue virgin

PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 7:10 pm
by Reschsmooth
I like the exposure and processing. The way the light and reflections creates lines on the front of the plane is good. I agree, however, that the composition isn't as inviting.

Re: Blue virgin

PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:27 pm
by Mitchell
I too like the processing but keep wanting to turn my head to the right...!

Re: Blue virgin

PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 10:18 pm
by MatthewRoberts
It must have a very good hand-break! :D

Re: Blue virgin

PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 5:58 pm
by surenj
Thanks guys.. This was taken through the boarding room window. I don't know why I chose such a angled viewpoint! :oops:

Re: Blue virgin

PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 9:41 pm
by biggerry
I don't know why I chose such a angled viewpoint!


I actually dont mind it....I like the way yellow guide line leads from the bottom right....The processing is good imo also...

Gives me a sense of safety


he he...the wings are the least of your problems.... :twisted: