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Today my dad had his convocation at usyd for his royal college of medical practitioners....that was great but this was what made the day for me - they hired a clown afterwards to entertain the kids ....

I tried to edit this shot and wanted some feed back on i guess the edit job and the photo all up

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Moz,

The shadows look, to me, a tad green, which is strongly suggestive that the wb isn't quite nailed. The third of these looks the best to me, but I would also pull back on the sharpening slightly.

And look to crop this a little: from the right, remove from the edge of the doorway across. From the top, perhaps leave fro the middle section of the windows.

I prefer the last simply due to more contrast. Would like to see goofy pants that the clown was wearing.. Do you have wide shots?