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 by Kreapen on Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:25 pm
Hey guys. I know i know record posting for images in the first 48 hours (when I'm keen on something i don't give up) So i posted a photoshop thread last night and got some feedback that really did help so here is attempt #2 Basically i fixed up the spots in the skin, and did a blurring technique that Matt K. had replied with. I'm posting 3 versions. The original. A copy where i had done the altercations. A copy where at the end i looked at it and couldnt figure out what was missing to give it that final "Snap" so i through over a lighting effect and increased the gloss and brought in the lighting effect obviously. So here we go. The Original  The first Edit  The last edit with lighting effect on it  Really looking foward to your feedback guys. Thanks and sorry for so many post`s asking for feedback so soon Regards Jay
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by BullcreekBob on Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:39 pm
I prefer the first one. The PP on the face is too much on the others.
YMMV
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by Greg B on Mon Dec 01, 2008 4:56 am
Jay, It is great that your wife is a willing model. I think both of your treatments here work pretty well, but I do not like the original shot because of the bars. I can see what you were tring to do, but I really don't think it has worked, the bars are intrusive instead of being interesting. Just my opinion. Anyway, I probably prefer the effect on the last one, it is a good soft finish with a pleasant glow. Greg - - - - D200 etc
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